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As the planks of wood fall from my feet I am drifting-
This is no ordinary tower
It is mine as long as I am here

The asbestos and lead,
the sulfur
it is in the air,
this air,

this air is collecting like pigeons
collecting in my lungs
like dust on a windowsill
like pigeons,
pigeon pigeon
why are you so sad?
I see the red in your eye like the father
of children playing
oh pigeon pigeon
didn't you see them,
the air is thin so that I can not breathe
how I hate you
mankind has moved my lungs into position
mankind has stopped my breathing
I suppose I don't have the skill to understand you, pigeon,
or this place

you are so very ugly, pigeon,
as mankind has written it
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~Anti-nutella Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very interesting with it has a very nice flow. Good job
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~SlytherinSeveruSnape May 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Very interesting, it flows in a very curious manner. Brilliant work. =)
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~Rattus--Norvegicus Apr 3, 2012  Student Photographer
Of everything I've seen you write, this is definitely my favorite. Really well done.
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